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Mental maths test

answer these five question has quick as you can to test your maths brain.

1) 4536+2375=

2) 7986-3241=

3) 48 divided by 6=

4) 54×63=

5)3647 rounded to the nearest 1000

Finally your test is finished hopefully you have got them all correct if not dont worry at least you have learnt something new and next time you will get the answer correct! ✖️ ➕ ➖ ➗

 

 

 


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Maths word problem

Today I am going to share a word problem with you!

There are 352 children going to legoland ,including the teachers, but the teachers don’t now how many coaches to take and the coach can hold up to 83 people. How many coaches do they need?

Coach maths question

Year 5 are going on a trip. Each coach holds 40 people .there are 798 people going how many coaches will they need ?

 

 

More posts!

I think RedKite and others should post more posts. There aren’t much posts on RedKite And we only post when our teachers tell us. So I say, MORE POSTS ON OUR BLOG😸😸😸

Thank you!

Worded problem

316children are going on a trip to Scotland. A coach can hold 50 children at a time. They travelled at 50 mph and tooke 120 minutes. How far did they travel and how many coaches were needed?

Alex’s maths

If the price for a flatscreen 3d tv is £996 and increases by 76% what is the price?

Word Problem

Here is a word problem for you!

Alicia payed for Mya and Sarah to go to the cinema to watch pitch perfect 2. It cost for all of them to go was £28.44. How much does it cost for one person to go to the cinema?


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Maths Problem…..

So, Miss Anderson asked us to make 4 word problems and 4 sums about the 4 methods: add, subtract, multiply and divide. See if you can answer this question and comment if you got the answer, LETS GO!

Lewis won the lottery and Alex said their should share. Lewis had 3/4 and Alex had 1/4, how much did Lewis have?

Making our own word problems!

Today in Maths, we have been making our own word problems. It was very fun and we had to make eight of our own and make four mental problems and four word problems. Here is one word problem I made!

Taylor Swift says ” All odd numbers multiplied by odd numbers equal odd numbers.” Do you think this is true or false? She also wonders whether odd numbers multiplied by even numbers equal odd or even numbers. What do you think?

my word problem

Alicia brought some chocolate bars each one costs £1.59 it came to £11.13 all together how many did she buy?

 

 

answer:7

A Maths question by leah

A class of 15 pupils are holding a disco which every pupil gets  2 portions of chips and a drink.  If a drink costs £1.49 and  2 portions of chips cost £2.99.  How much does the disco cost altogether?

A Maths Question

A car costs £25,666 Lucy wants 4 what would she pay?

MATHS

If a school holds 506 pupils and they go on a trip and a bus holds 37 seats. How many buses will they need?


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Recommended Reading List for Red Kite

I am sending home a recommended reading list as it is something I discussed with many of your parents at our Parent/Teacher meetings this term. I am lucky to be the teacher of a class of readers, but I really want you to challenge yourselves with the books you read! Not only will these books take you on journeys around the world (and beyond) they will also show you examples of quality writing which will in turn inspire your own writing. I am contacting Southcote Library to see if they can order in the texts I am recommending and  the Twitter community to see if we can get more recommendations!

Mrs Farrell


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How teachers really work

What is a teacher

In the Animal Kingdom teachers are a unusual breed. The actual word ‘teacher‘ comes from the Latin word ‘teshla‘ that means class room beast. These creatures are often scavenging through library looking for things to make children’s life a misery. Teachers have been around since the 18th century rotting children’s brains!

Diet

Teachers are always educating children on what a healthy diet it but secretly they are lapping up coffee. Some teachers have   become extinct as America has bought Cadburys World but what the last Mars Bars left on the shelves don’t know is that soon they will become the prey. I bet you won’t believe it but most teachers feast on soup as they try to sneak skinny jeans (mainly art teachers).

Habitat

Nesting in a PPA room, you can find a flock of social teachers under piles of rulers and paper clips. Animal experts from around the world cant seem to work out if they are nocturnal or not as most are awake all day and all night. Some more hostile teachers like the staff room as there is more cake and gossip to be found there. Most of these unusual species are found at the head teacher’s office as they had skipped Mondays planning!

Different breeds of teacher

P.E teacher

Always caught eating McDonalds buffet lunches is the P.E teacher. Very energetic they are always hunting through the P.E cupboard. In Adidas tracksuit bottoms and Nike jumpers with Ralph Lauren bags full of  balls hanging of his shoulder he is ready for his next lesson. With sweat dripping down his face because one of his balls has popped. These creatures prefer the out side environment what ever the whether rain or shine, wind or snow!

TAs

All main teachers boast about how their the boss but really the children know that the TAs are the true boss. TAs do all the beautiful displays fetching things for teachers. Just because some TAs are a bit older then the mains they still held the class together. These spicies


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Riddles #1

I have question for you, when a cow laughs, does milk come out of its nose?


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Riddles #2

I have question for you, if you blew a bubble in space, would it pop?


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Riddles #3

I have a question for you, if a jogger runs at the speed of sound, can he still hear his IPod?

Riddles #4

I have a question for you, if you answer me, allthough I never ask you questions, what am I?

Riddles #5

I have a question for you, what stays in one corner, but travels around the world?

Riddles #6

I have a question for you, what has a foot but no legs?

Children’s nightmare

Teachers are a rare breed of mammals. The word teacher comes from the ancient Chinese which means zingchow. Teachers come from the animal kingdom and are a very hostile species.

 

Although they scavenge chocolate and lap coffee they watch their diet by consuming vegetables and soup to sneak in skinny jeans and leggings into school. The males eat buffet lunches in their class rooms as they are to busy to eat between the designated time. Some breeds of teacher have been known to become extinct by the low levels of chocolate.

 

Most teachers nest in unmarked homework books with their flocks but the solitary creatures guard their ‘precious’ meeting room. Animal experts have not had enough research on teachers to find out if their nocturnal or not. Some more aggressive creatures hide in offices ready to pounce on unexpected prey. The lesser spotted are nerds that hide in I.C.T suite.

 

The T.A’s

Although the cubs think that teachers are in charge actually the T.A’s are the brains and they rule the class rooms. Although they are animals and they like to feast on fish and bugs they secretly snack on Mars bars. If there was no T.A’s the teachers would devour us all 1 by 1 and regurgitate our bones in front of their next meal.

The Art teacher

Always scavenging through bins to find usable paint pots, the Art teacher takes anything she wants and uses it to help her cubs paint master pieces. Usually she can be found in her own little waterhole scrubbing of any stains that dare to stay on the art equipment.

The P.E teacher

The P.E teacher is always found wearing biking shorts, he’s secretly trying to loose weight to impress the females. Children have been known to have black eyes after dodging balls. His lessons have been known to send children from predator to prey, passive to hostile.         

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What You Need To Know Is In RED KITE!

If you know nightingale class blog, I do a little series called What You Need To Know, now that is in this blog NOW! To start of the first ever What You Need To Know, it’s a little treat for Leah Furnivall.

PENGUINS

Penguins ( order sphenisciforms, family spheniscidae ) are a group of aquatic, flightless birds living almost exclusively in the Southern Hemisphere, especially in Antarctica. Highly adapted for life in the water, penguins have countershaded black and white plumage, and their wings have evolved into flippers. Most penguins feed on krill, fish and squid and other forms of sealife caught while swimming underwater. They spend about half there life on land and half in the oceans. Although all penguin species are native to the South Hemisphere, they are not only found in cold climates, such as Antartica. Seeeeeeeeeeeee Yaaaaaaaaaaaa

Alexander’s Blade Video

Today I finished my iMovie and I’m proud of what I’ve done


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Black And White

You might think that your life is a total disaster, but there is always someone in the world that has a worse one than yours like Sophies. If you would like to read more no one is stopping You.

Hello my name is Sophie Cunningham. I would like to tell the story of my mysterious but interesting life. I was aged 14 when my whole world fell apart, I did not have the best childhood because my mother, Kate and my father, Harvey both died in very tragic ways, that I would never not in a million years have thought of. my mother died from a disease called septicemic plague. She was raced to the hospital but it was too late. My dad died in an unexpected car accident which was caused by the stress of my mother’s devastating death. When my parents died, I didn’t know what to do, I panicked and I got scared I didn’t have anyone left, no one came,I was all alone. I really wish I met my moms original family now. I never met my mum’s family because she broke up with them long before I was born and my father never had a family he was an orphan. Since my beloved parents were dead what meaning did life have now? I was about to commit suicide when I remembered that my father did not have his parents but he still fought and found true love and he became something big…

My parents handed over all their lost cent and just after a day of my fathers death some social workers came knocking on my door. I opened it and they dragged me across to their office, they made loads of phone calls until I got bored and went to  eavesdropped on them, what I heard was heartbreaking, they wanted to foster me only because of my money, they wanted me to transfer all my money to them when I was old enough to do so, until then I would be there maid, what made all this worse was that the social workers had known about it and they never thought about my future. I started heaving and my chest tightened, I got angry but kept it bottled up. The last thing I wanted to know was that I was being used for money, I knew I had to run away to save what was  left of my parents money and properties. The social workers made it really hard to escape it’s maybe because they surely don’t want the owner of the precious money to escape, but they were so pathetically dumb that they forgot to close the windows. I planned to escape at midday when super strong security guards swapped their shift ,I

knew that because I am the world’s best eavesdropper and also because the social workers were so stupid that they left a timetable of the times when the guards changed.

Ah It’s time to say farewell to the social workers and hi to London, where grandma lives. I didn’t know it was this easy to escape, they weren’t even guarding the area where I was escaping. I am now on a underground train heading to London. It costed a lot but it was all worth it. I hope grandma doesn’t mind. She hated my parents but she can’t hate me, after all we do have the same blood running in our veins. “ding dong next stop London”. That’s my stop. I couldn’t believe my eyes i’ve been a lot of places but this was the most beautifullest and formal. Oh there’s my cab. I’ve never been in a cab it is probably because my father didn’t trust them. I don’t know why, but maybe he was wrong it is pretty decent. London has so many wonders, I can’t wait to go and explore with grandma unless she doesn’t want to. ding dong hello grandma. I wasn’t expecting you. Where is your parents?… they died unexpectedly and then some social workers came and took me. Oh that was nice of them. But they didn’t do their job correctly they only came because of the money. So escaped and that’s when i ended up here. So will you please let me stay with you. Uhh ok but only for a little while. Thanks grandma that was so nice of you. Alright, let me go and make you some dinner you must be hungry from comin


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Riddles #7

I have a question for you, imagine being in a tank with flesh eating sharks, how do you not get eaten?

My weekend journey!

This weekend I went to Bristol to see my cousins. It was great fun but a very boring journey! My cousin Jaspriya said “I cant wait for the Easter holidays because then you can come over my house again or I can come around yours!” I had so much fun at Bristol I can not wait to go again!

Please comment about your fantastic weekend!


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Alyssa’s fraction to percentage to decimal tutorial


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How to turn a fraction into a percent

Here is Banita’s tutorial of how to turn a fraction into a percent. Can you give her feedback as to how she can improve her explanation?


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Jim and Alex’s Blade Video

Made in red kite classroom………..enjoy and leave a like and a comment

 


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How teachers really work!

Teachers are a rare, endangered species. Their Greek name was Jeachers, meaning of classroom nightmare, but through time, there name changed to teacher! Even though, they do educate us they are solitary creatures and few are hostile when they give out homework some they can rot children brains. Normally, they’re located in the corridors yapping with others, planning their big writes so they can punish children.

Diet

Although they say to their cubs that they should have healthy food really, they devour chocolate so they have enough energy to catch any child who don’t bring in their pe kit. As well as lapping coffee, at nighttime they plan what maths test they’re going to use to punish children the next day. But strangely, these viscous breeds scavenge healthy oranges and occasionally soup so they can wear different coloured skinny jeans.                                          A.


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Short division explained…

Please watch our explanations on how to carrying out short division.  Can you spot the mistakes? If so, write a comment to let us know.






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How teachers really work.

 

How teachers really work.

What is a teacher?

Have  you ever seen what teachers are like within the animal kingdom? Teachers are an unknown species that come in all different shapes and size. They weren’t always known as teachers they were known as “teacheramus” witch means “bossy boots”. Everyday children come to school petrified as the teachers are predators waiting for their prey to arrive. 

Diet

A teachers diet is usually based on chocolate, tea and soup. They say they need chocolate so they can keep up with the little energetic cubs. Teachers are constantly devouring soup so they can fit into unauthorized skinny jeans behind the Head teachers back. When its freezing cold the teachers sit their with a boiling hot cup of tea while the children stare at them angrily. Teachers are also making tea and coffee extinct as they consume the caffeine in it over 20 times per day.

Habitats

Teachers are usually found in the Staff room nesting under piles of pencil sharpening’s or unfinished maths papers, anything to do with work really. Scientist have not yet discovered if these creatures are nocturnal or not as some of them seem to stay awake all day and all night but then complain that they haven’t had enough sleep. Others are also found in PPA rooms the Head teacher believes they’re planning lessons but they’re actually playing games and having tea party’s in their different types of packs.

The Nursery teacher

The Nursery teacher is usually camouflaged in paint mixed with snot. She is usually found washing paint pallets and brushes in her little water hole. When she comes to school she usually is wearing a flowery top, a white skirt and childish blue patent shoes. The left overs of her nails are so blunt where she chews them of to calm her nerves when the bossy boots take the children to a crowded social event.

The P.E teacher

This odd type of creature is very social due to running around and interacting with the cubs. Hes always found lurking around in the P.E cuboard planning lessons while playing football by himself. While hes teaching he scoffs down a meaty baguette infront of the children like nothings wrong. He see the children like his own herd waiting to devour anyone that tries to tell them off.

The Head teacher

This is no ordinary type of breed this is the most hostile- she is known as the Head teacher, but in children’s eyes, shes known as”Hermajestie”. The Queen of the animal kingdom, no one would ever stand in her way. If teachers weren’t there she would consume the fledglings one by one regurgitating their bones one by one infront of the next victim. When stalking around in assembly she has her red shot devil eyes out to catch any child that even dares to speak.

 



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How Teachers Really Work

When you’re ready to publish your fantastic descriptions of how teachers really work, it would be great to put a picture with it. I’ve found a few different websites for you to choose from. You’ll each need to choose the best style to fit with your own type of writing and the character you have created.

Some of them make animal-based pictures…

Some of them make monster-based pictures…

If you need help saving (or using ‘Print Screen’)

  • Some of the sites have a ‘save’ option to download the picture – that’s nice and easy!
  • Others you will need to take a screen shot, either use
    Print Screen (look below the videos for a couple of quick steps)
    Snipping Tool (there’s a shortcut to this on your desktop)

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Pizza!

Today our Teacher Mr Lathia said that we had to name 4 pizza’s. The first pizza was a PAC man pizza, the second pizza was a heart shaped pizza the third pizza was a octopus pizza was a under the sea pizza. I named the PAC man pizza pacolicious.


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My Death

My hands were frantically slipping. I had no control what so ever. My heart racing as I fell to my death. I had mixed emotions I was joyful because I was going to meet my mother and father, but I was also sad that how short my life was.

3 days ago

Ross cried as he got his tarnished ancient case and headed home. I was very happy that Ross was gone but that was not enough for me. I wanted him gone for good. So I asked him if he wanted to go on a mountain climbing trip. I knew he was going to say yes so I made it so that we would go where no one stepped before…                                                                                                                                  mountains peak one of the most highest and life killing mountains in the world. I feel very happy that Carl has let me to go on a mountain trip with him. Imagine all the fun we will have climbing that mountain. I never knew he was a profesinal rock climber.

I have now arrived to mountains peak. I am amazed at the big sight. I am kind of worried that I will climbing that tommorow, but I have done much more scary things. Brilliant no one is here ecxept for us to Carl grinned.


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the regretted school trip

10 years ago…

Jenny was dawdling behind the other tourists, pulling rude faces and generally showing off. I sighed. I knew this meant trouble, but when it came to Jenny I couldn’t help but get carried away.

I knew I was being a show off but I was bored. And Leah looked like she would be up for trouble if I convinced her! I nudged her shoulder as we both overheard another tourist telling his daughter about some Roman coins that still lay under the earth! I dared Leah to come with me to find them then everyone will know our names and Leah being the bored dare devil, well, she agreed to it! So we both slipped away from the trip to go and see if these Roman coins we had heard about were really there!!!

We ran to were the tourist pointed to show his daughter. Then we saw a hole then Jenny said let’s start here. We decided Jenny was going to go down but then I said don’t we need a rope or something but Jenny just told me not to be a woes but after all it wasn’t me going down there it was her.  I watch anxiously as she went down. But suddenly… Her foot slipped and she fell she saw a light it was burning fire but then she got hold of a rock.

 I went down to save her but then I slipped Jenny grabbed my hand and we were both hanging by a rock but it looked like it was going to give in soon! The rock broke out of this massive dich we seemed to be stuck in.

Grinning I came with a rope and stood at the edge they were pledging for help. But then I said why should I help you. They had never done anything for me in there whole entire life there life was so perfect but could I live with letting 2 9 year old girls get burnt alive when I could of helped them then no one would like me!

 

The teacher look around panicking she asked everyone when they had last seen Leah Jenny and Jasmin but everyone said at the beginning of the tore. She was so worried what would Mrs. Swain say and even worse what would there mum say what if there mum called the police she would be jailed for life!

 

I was so scared could I trust Jasmin or not I could get burnt to death down here but then Jasmin chucked down a rope but should I clime up it or stay down here. But I began to wobble so I grabbed Leah’s hand and told her we would do it together so we started to climb.

We both came out with burns and a broken arm were we fell but I sat right next to Jenny and Jasmin always came to visit us she was our hero and she still is today!!!


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The Adventure To Death!!!

The adventure to
DEATH!!!
This is the adventure of how my best friend died. The “trip of the lifetime” all started out fine but then started to crash and burn as it went along.
It all started like this…………
Scarlet was on a school trip to the Amazon Rainforest because they had been studying it at school for a literacy report. Their teacher Miss Ackerman decided to take them for a real experience, as it was for them getting into a ‘top notch secondary school’. As some of them were mucking about on the plane Scarlet and Nathanyel were studying about the Rainforest so they had their big piles of books and stacks of paper and pens all across their little desks. The others had monopoly with paper airplanes and cludo.
When they arrived Scarlet and her friend Nathanyel were amazed by the rainforest and the creatures. Mya (the mean girl) hated Scarlet they went way back with hate all she wanted to do was ruin her adventure.
While everyone was fast asleep Mya was the only one who wasn’t asleep. Mya crept over to were Scarlet was sleeping took her backpack from her took her map out of it and switched it with another. She slipped it back where she found it and fell asleep like nothing had happened. Miss Ackerman woke up the class and told them they had a whole day of adventure ahead of them Scarlet definitely did.
Scarlet was following the class when she heard a noise she made sure Miss Ackerman or her class mates weren’t looking and snuck of towards the noise. Nathanyel turned around and saw she wasn’t their he was extremely worried he knew Mya must have did something. But Mya was still their so It couldn’t have been her but he didn’t know what she did.
Scarlet knew she couldn’t turn back now she was too far into the rainforest to stop. She stopped to look at the map and knew something was up but didn’t want to believe it. She looked around she was completely alone shed never felt that for years, she was scared but wasn’t a quitter.
Nathanyel started to worry shed never been gone this long the good thing about him he was one of the best trackers so he made sure no one was looking and left. Scarlet thought she heard something big she took a step back and another one more………SWOOSH she plummeted down like a pencil being dropped onto the floor except of the pencil it was Scarlet and except of the floor it was over hundred foot drop deadly waterfall. “AHHHHHHHHHHHHH” “HELP HELP HELP” she screamed, shouted, wailed and bellowed.


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The Artic

The Artic

This is where my story begins. It’s dramatic but it will change…

5 years ago, Ever since I started uni I looked forward to help my Father in his studies as a scientist working with polar bears. I was so eager and excited because I was going to see my Dad again after 15 long years. Then we set off, we was 50 miles away from my Dads base. My friends where chilling while I was looking outside the plane window encountering all the fascinating creatures.

Suddenly the snow harshly fell the plane rocked from side to side as the oxygen mask fell, I grabbed it as fast as I could  and breathed heavily into it. The snow buried the plane in the field of white powder it was a horrifying crash. The swarm of blazing hot fire was getting g damped out by the snow no one on the plane was heard no faint screams for help or upset small cries just silence. It was a blurry from my eyes couldn’t see nothing except brilliant white snow but most of it turned deep red from the blood of my 2 best friends. I was in pain because my leg, it felt like someone was piercing a razor sharp knife through it I  was scared, worried it was like my mind was a jumble sale of sad emotions. Meanwhile in my dad’s base he put a tracker in a polar bear to see what it does on a daily day biases, on the radar it shows when it’s near people so it can see what it does. Back at the plane crash I was still on the floor with pain then I heard my friends voice then another then I felt two ice frozen hands picking me up. “Are you alright” Trinity said with a careful tone.

“ALRIGHT , I’m frozen like ice my leg is  god now’s how much pain and you’re asking me if I’m alright” I bellowed I do admit I did feel a bit guilty after raising my voice. In the distance, Wesaw a faint crooked back shadow then we heard havy footsteps like me when I stap up the staircase in my house but heavier louder and sounded more animal like. “what is that” Lucy said in a puzzled tone.

Trinity answered back “I don’t know.”

It’s a polar bear it’s a polar bear  IT’S A POLAR BEAR!”I screamed with excitement.

“AHHHH ITS A POLAR BEAR RUN!” shouted Lucy for her life. She went off in the distance then stopped.

“Pipe down Lucy” I said but it think I needed to pipe down more. Anyway back to the polar bear is was so close that I had to move back to the ruins of the plane. It clawed its way through the snow like I was its prey. The wild polar bear sniffed every inch of me the roared at that same I had sweat pouring down my face and its Sylvia all over me like eww. I was worried and satifised on the way it reacted to me, then I remeberd when I was liitle how my dad taught me how to tame a polar bear.

15 tears ago “Daddy don’t go where are you going please don’t leave” I begged when I was 5.

“Sorry sugar bear I have to go on my studies and I hope you join me some day and if you do this is how you tame a polar bear.”

“you first stay patient and don’t move then move your hand slowly to is snout then press slowly down then it should roar and put its head down.”

“Don’t gooooooo” I sobbed .

 

Then I woke up and I waited patiently and didn’t move then moved my right hand slowly to is snout and pressed slowly down it roared again nearly

Deafening me then put its head down . I did It I tamed a polar bear it was my first but it definitely wasn’t the last. My

Friends scurried along to the wreckage plane and then looked surprised the polar bear wasn’t keen on them and tried to attack but I moved in the way then it pulled itself back. I wanted to climb on so I did try I flat in the snow a couple of times then I gradually reached my goal.


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A painful skiing trip

A painful daring skiing trip

I have been dared to ski down the biggest mountain in the world risking my life to be one of the first people in the world to conker this mighty beast. My friend Lewis has convinced me to career down this mountain, it is full of dangers and sharp turns. The snowy powder on the perilous mountain has eliminated most of its victims and I’ve got a feeling that I will be the next one. Hopefully I will be able to take ownership of this huge mountain. Although I’ve never been skiing before I have had lessons when I was younger. I have never had much confidence in myself and I’m afraid of heights but that doesn’t stop me from achieving my goals. Hopefully I won’t hurt myself if something goes wrong.

 

Soon I was half way up the mountain I could see someone scaling up way before me and I thought he was doing it for fun. When I was almost there and eventually made it to the top he was nowhere to be seen. I got ready to launch myself off the platform and I could see a tiny black dot at the bottom of the mountain which I thought was Lewis.

 

As I flew from the cliff I could see massive boulders underneath me. I thought this was the end of my life. Suddenly, my ski twisted underneath me. I felt a fiery pain in my leg and the force sent me over the boulder.

 

I feel as though my leg is broken as I roll the rest of the way down the white powdery mountain, I scream down the mountain. I have never had this much pain in my life.


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The Sharks Revenge

The Sharks Revenge
Jack Scarlet, one of the supreme men alive in the USA, no one knows why he is famous but I do, how do I know you ask? Well that’s what I am going to share in this menacing story, just one thing I have to say, it’s going to involve one of the scariest predators on planet Earth, yes, it is SHARKS! On the 2nd of May 2004, an acquitted girl called Michelle went out to sea to have a dip in the ocean, her boyfriend, Zack, told her that he saw ripples in the sea and thought they could be ripples of a slayer “Michelle, don’t go in the water, there could be a shark or a crocodile.” But Michelle didn’t listen, just then a hair-raising feeling hit Michelle, then a marauder was about 2 metres away from the teenager, at that time there was no time to cry out, Michelle tried to swim back to shore but before she was close to a diminutive island the shark striked at Michele. The teenager’s legs was served at the hip, and they sank, spinning slowly to the bottom of the ocean.
The following day, the chief of police, Jack Scarlet, went to the seashore and communicated to Zack “I told her not to go in the ocean but she didn’t listen to me, Michelle just swam out to the ocean and was eaten WAH WAH WAH MY GIRLFRIEND IS GONE WAH WAH WAH”. Jack felt sorry for Zack, they were best friends in elementary school and high school so Jack was going make it up for Zack, by killing the feeding frenzy. But he couldn’t do it alone, he was going to need help.


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Falling from the sky

Falling from the sky

This is how my story began. It was life and death. It was such a dramatic ending but it was true. I was so lucky. It all started a day before my sweet 16th birthday. My parents bought me a diamond ring, it once belonged to kings and queens many years ago but now it’s mine!
It all started like this, my parents booked me Honey, Jade, Coco, and Emily to do parachuting (there my friends) I was so excited I could not wait. It was like a dream come true! As the demonstrator was showing us what to do my stomach started to bubble and I had a very worried feeling that something was going to happen, but hopefully it will be alright. When it was time to jump I first waited for my friends to do it and then all my worries were gone! As it was time for me to jump I took a few steps back, ran and I jumped as high as I could out of the helicopter. First it was like falling then gliding through the swift air. When I looked at my friends they were laughing so much I felt really annoyed. “Skye fell so dramatically, come Skye catch up!” Jade screeched.

Just then coming out of no were was this enormous angry snow storm coming our way. We were so scared so I tried as much as I could to catch up with my friends but it was too late. They were gone I tried looking for them even screaming for them but no signal. I did not know what to do what if they have already landed no that would be too late I thought. Suddenly there was a creak than a crack what was the noise but then you will never guess what it was it was the parachute the rope was about to break. I tried holding the sides together but it snapped! But by the time you know it I was racing down through the sky. All I could do was scream for help. Then I just realised that the sea was beneath me I knew I was in big trouble I did not know what to do but the worst bit about it was that I didn’t know how to swim. I was so scared. As I was falling from the sky the corner of my eye caught the beautiful sunset. It was like a million flyer fly’s put together to make an amazing horizon. I could not believe how a sunset could be such an amazing sight when falling from the sky when your life is at risk. I just couldn’t believe that this would be the last day of my life without saying goodbye to my beloved parents and also how will they even find out, my life was so complicated then it was like my brain was twisted.
All of a sudden coming out of nowhere was a noise. It was a helicopter noise someone was here! What a pretty girl there with the most valuable ring on but not for long Shay Royer is out to steal it. I started calling out and waving my arms so the person will take notice of me. Then he made the most evil look ever! But it’s not about the look it’s about whether he is listens or not. Lucky enough he listens, as I jump in he suddenly he grabs my parachute of and throws it to the back of the helicopter. A nervous look approaches my face as I grit my teeth a thank you splutters out of my mouth with discussed. As I tiptoe away from the boy out of his mouth slipped what his name was it was Shay Royer nice name but disturbing features.


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The Fire

Shattering nature, the scorching machine was burning anything in its innocent path, like a disease becoming out of control. Destroying vegetation, frightened birds flew to safety, as the blinding smoke rose. Quickly, the scorching heat spreads leaving merciful buildings to be ripped apart.


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Forest on fire

Hard breathing smoke released from the out of control fiery disease , shattering all vegetation in its innocent path. It scorching hot like the earth .Erratically raging through the land like it owns it. The mind blowing fiery machine destroying everything. Gradually making mother natures tormentor .


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Our dream house!!!

Today we designed our own dream house but we couldn’t do it to complicated because we have to do it again on Google sketch up!


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The fire in the forest

 The flesh eating disease is ripping through the vegetation causing heartbreaking deaths. Scorching across the trees the blazing fire shatters  lives of the brave and innocent .The mind blowing , hot as lava fire races across to the unfortunate. The fire is as horrific as the devils humongous fingers.

by Sarah

 Thank you for reading I hope you enjoy


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The fire in the forest

The mind blowing heat rips itself through the forest trees with anger. Zooming like an out of control disease, destroying all of its unfortunate way.Spreading its blazing light everywhere it over takes the forest. Its a deadly,shattering burning machine!!!!!!!!  

 

 

I hope you really like it if you do please leave a comment because there is a competition in class and i am hoping to win. THANK YOU SOOO MUCH!!!!!!!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


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Hello! This is my work i did for literacy today:

ENJOY!

Ripping through the vegetation like a spreading disease the wildfire scorches every living thing within its flesh-eating path. Many unfortunate villagers are dangerously chocked by the thick black smoke as it spreads as if it were sent from hell. The blazing killing machine destroys houses and buildings erratically in seconds. Mother nature sent this prodigious beast to ruin everything we know and to send horror among all people. 

the burning forest

As hot as the devils fingers the blazing burning machine ripped through the innocent path of trees, shattering the unfortunate forest to ashes. The smoke polluted the air as the scorching fire illuminated all vegetation.    


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THE FIRE TO END ALL FIRES!!!

THE FIRE TO END ALL FIRES!!!

The flesh eating machine spirals out of control like a disease torturing all in its unfortunate way. As hot as the devils finger tips it rips apart all of the innocent souls. Across all of the horrified nature its destroying life as we know it!

The reason i have wrote this is because of a competition in class. Please comment and like if your someone from school or around the world. I hope you enjoyed the beginning of my story.


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The forest fire

Shattering nature the blistering fire rips through the forest like an out of control disease. The fire breathing machine tares anything in its natures path. The breathtaking devil torches everything in the green land. Ripping like a tornado the scorching fire fly’s across the dense trees.  

 

please leave a comment!!! 😀  ;D   

I want a Australian flag please or a New Zealand one c: 😀 😛


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Awesome Sentences!!

O.K, get ready to be blown away by the mass of awesomeness of these amazing sentences!! Subject: Fire . This flesh eating devil is as powerful as hell  fiery core. The heat is too hot for innocent birds so they come crashing in like a speedy F1 car. It tears apart the hard wood like a shark munching on its helpless prey. Lave doesn’t compare to this nightmare god created. THANK YOU FOR LOOKING AT THIS BLOG POST……………………    

sentences

I  will enjoy reading all are fire sentences.

the fire:)

Shattering vegetation the scorching fire spreads like an out of control disease.  The blinding smoke fly’s through the air.  In a heartbeat the whole forest is in flames.  Racing, the burning machine destroys all in its unfortunate path.  Its mind-blowing powers leaves innocent people homeless.    

 

 

 

 

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burning forest

Its from the Devil himself, its a spreading disease and it will disintegrate your flesh they call it fire. Like a Tornado it destroys anything in its unfortunate path.

The Fire

Ripping through the trees like a out of control disease , the fire destroyed every thing in it’s unfortunate path.  Zooming through the forest the deadly heat got closer to the town.   

Burning Forest

As hot as the breath from Hell, the scorching flame eliminates human life, like a burning disease that spreads from one tree to another to create ashes and a heatwave. The flesh dissolving fire is hotter then the DEVILS finger tips. Never doubt this mighty warrior because if you do you might find your homeless

Great books

I would recommend some great books witch are wolf Brother, Undead pets, Holes and all of the Diary of a wimpy kids but if you can find any more  good books i would like to hear about them.


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Welcome!

Red Kites…

I would really like you to use this blog page to share your work widely and get writing tips from people all across the world. Up for the challenge?

By next Friday, please write up one of your best pieces of recent work and see if you can get people to comment! Ask for tips on improvement as well as comments on what they like.

Let’s see who can get a comment from another country… or even continent. Even getting someone from home to read your work instantly gives you a wider audience.

I look forward to seeing how this goes,

Mrs Farrell


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